Notes for Improvement
General Notes
- Use the Practivistas Dominicana/Page template and criteria page for as a formatting template, and refer to it for specific grading criteria.
- Add some photos or one really good one to the top of your page
- Incomplete sections (Final Design/Construction)
- Missing sections (Conclusions & Team)
Abstract
- Abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page... it only summarizes (like a research paper)
Background
- Consider revising sentence structure
- Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper)
- Include information about who you are and where Las Malvinas is located
Objective
- Be a little more specific (add design and construct)
Criteria
Construction
Timeline
- Good start
- Add an introduction
- Come up with actual propsed dates as soon as possible
Costs
- Fix math - if total $US was what you were aiming for (which is helpful) then make sure you label it as such and also add a total RD$ column
- Add introduction
- You won't be including individual costs for each material that goes into the blocks you will use (that's block biz's job) instead I assume we will estimate cost per block and reference the other block team's budget/page
How To/Design
- Good start on the how to section.
- Good design of destacamento.