Notes for Improvement
Abstract
- Abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page... it only summarizes (like a research paper)
Background
- Consider revising sentence structure
- Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper)
- Include information about who you are and where Las Malvinas is located
Objective
- Be a little more specific (add design and construct)