Seems pretty good, and is nicely layed out. I would add more to the draw back, but that is about it. good luck.
Kristen
Overall this was really good. Lots of decent research backing your ideas. I would continue to develop the section on drawbacks; maybe explain them a bit more. I would also add a section that explains in close detail how the particles find the cancer.
Ben Sturtz--Benjamin W. Sturtz 10:46, 8 April 2008 (PDT)
I agree in saying that this is a good start. I think you could probably get rid of the project part, since you're just writing this up as an actual article as opposed to a report. I like how you started to try to break up your sections into sub-categories like in the resources, and I think if you could carry that back to the first two sections (detection and destroying) then that would make it easier to follow and more digestible. --Sean McFarland 10:50, 8 April 2008 (PDT)
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