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Talk:CCAT natural paints 2017

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Initial feedback[edit source]

Nice start. Please provide more background, e.g. what and where is CCAT, mention Humboldt State University, and briefly describe the CCAT building and current types and conditions of the paints.

In addition, link to CCAT early on in the background. Finally, Tess' link is broken.

Thanks, --Lonny (talk) 15:08, 24 January 2017 (PST)


Hello,

This is a good start but needs some editing and additions. The first few paragraphs especially should be free of grammatical and spelling errors. This is the first impression your reader gets of you and you want it to be good. Please re-read your first few paragraphs out loud and check for errors or strange wording. You need more information in your background section, what is this project for, the class.

I would recommend putting the information about the client and CCAT at the top of your lit review and then get into the paint information.

Also, try to add a sentence or two for each header before you get into the subsections on what will be covered.

Good start!

Rebecca Stark (Grader)

Criteria[edit source]

Hello Team, Your criteria is pretty good. Your room constraint is a bit unclear. I would change it so it says you want to paint as much space as possible. Your constraint should also state whether more or less is better, for example for cost less is better.

Rebecca Stark (grader)