Some initial feedback:

  • As we discussed, I think you should make a page called CCAT greenhouse. Describe the greenhouse there as a project. Then make this the CCAT greenhouse/OM.
  • "There is a concern of salt from the beach grass leeching into the clay and plaster of the wall, drying and cracking it." By whom?
  • Any instruction regarding the sensor readings?
  • Step 5 looks like troubleshooting.
  • Show more images.
  • Data logging as a future change?
  • Replace CCAT project name with the correct name.

--Lonny (talk) 10:42, 22 April 2014 (PDT)