Feedback sections/template[edit source]
Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:
- Abstract
- Good abstract
Include a picture of the final design to grab readers attention
Background- Explain where in Arcata is in California
Don't use the first person (I,We, Our) etc..
- Problem statement
- Possibly add a reference in this section
- Criteria
List criteria in descending order- Look over constraints once more for criteria
Literature Review- Include the references next to the sentences they belong to
Make sure to not include images you don't have the rights toIf you have the rights, make sure to use a caption to give credit. See Help:Images on how.
Construction- Very good table maybe add a little more detail
- Design section should be a subheading section inside the construction section
- The layers table should be a figure describing each one. The figure used in Literature review should be good
add a captions to the drawings of design
Timeline
- Organize table a little cleaner
Add some detail to each week and what was done
CostsMake sure the decimals and significant figures agree in the cost table
OperationInclude a table with steps similar to the construction table
Maintenanceexplain in more detail the maintenance required for cleaning roof
ScheduleThis should be a schedule depicted in table
Instructions- Conclusion
- Good work so far include these sections completed with the next appropedia upload
- Testing results
- Discussion
- Lessons learned
- Next steps
- Troubleshooting
Team
- References
- Listed correctly, look for some more references