Talk:Mass produced thermostatic valve for water pasteurization

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Great start[edit source]

You are off to a good start. I would like to see everyone in the group participating in the development. A few minor things- I did a reference for you correctly - which creates a hyperlink and is much easier to use. Also consider linking to existing text with double brackets - I did a few examples of things you might want to write a short paragraph on and then put in the code {{stub}} . Add images of your designs and describe in detail - it is ok (better actually) if we can see an evolution in the design. Try to get your design down to as few components as possible and then the actual manufacturing will be significantly simplified. Consider the function of each component and how another component might fill the same function.

-- Joshua 20:19, 16 March 2009 (UTC)