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*Fix math - if total $US was what you were aiming for (which is helpful) then make sure you label it as such and also add a total RD$ column | *Fix math - if total $US was what you were aiming for (which is helpful) then make sure you label it as such and also add a total RD$ column | ||
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*You won't be including individual costs for each material that goes into the blocks you will use (that's block biz's job) instead I assume we will estimate cost per block and reference the other block team's budget/page | *You won't be including individual costs for each material that goes into the blocks you will use (that's block biz's job) instead I assume we will estimate cost per block and reference the other block team's budget/page | ||
Revision as of 16:36, 16 June 2014
Notes for Improvement
Abstract
- Abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page... it only summarizes (like a research paper)
Background
- Consider revising sentence structure
- Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper)
- Include information about who you are and where Las Malvinas is located
Objective
- Be a little more specific (add design and construct)
Criteria
Construction
Timeline
- Good start
- Add an introduction
- Come up with actual propsed dates as soon as possible
Costs
- Fix math - if total $US was what you were aiming for (which is helpful) then make sure you label it as such and also add a total RD$ column
- Add introduction
- You won't be including individual costs for each material that goes into the blocks you will use (that's block biz's job) instead I assume we will estimate cost per block and reference the other block team's budget/page