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| Your criteria needs some work. You have quite a few grammar and spelling errors. You need to re-read your work or have someone else read it before you submitted it. Also be sure to stay professional. Your constraints should also state whether more or less is better, for example for cost less is better. | | Your criteria needs some work. You have quite a few grammar and spelling errors. You need to re-read your work or have someone else read it before you submitted it. Also be sure to stay professional. Your constraints should also state whether more or less is better, for example for cost less is better. |
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| It looks like you are working hard but have a lot to go. You are missing sections (abstract, operation, maintenance, testing). Read through your writing, check your language, be sure to only use professional language avoid things like "amazing" or first person "our, us, we". It helps it sound more professional by distancing yourselves. Move your lit review to right after your criteria. Check you Lit review to be sure every section has a source. Avoid your opinion in the lit review. Re-word your problem statement, a lot of repeating. The construction pictures are a bit small. In general more pictures is better. Keep working hard.
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