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| Article was incomplete when peer edited. Insufficient work done -First sentence is wordy and difficult to read for opening sentence. Suggest changing it
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| - The use of composite materials in the aerospace industry have allowed engineers to overcome previous obstacles that have been meet
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| - Second paragraph, first sentence. "this base scaffolding" to "the matrix's scaffolding"
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| - Good use of the linking to other articles to help provide background information.
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| - Good start to the article but requires more work and references.
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| - Article has been well laid out for more work with a solid template and format
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| == this is no where near complete ==
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| --[[User:J.M.Pearce|Joshua]] 13:30, 20 November 2009 (UTC)
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