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Good job. In the last sentence of your first paragraph I would omit the "as well as" and star a new sentence. Getting rid of the phrase should make the paragraph flow better.

Use an asterisk sign instead of a hyphen for bullet points. Asterisks are formatted bullet points in wiki code.

The sentences in the last section shouldn't have had bullet points because they are complete sentences.

You capitalized a few words that were not supposed to be.

I'm pretty sure that Gazcue and Zona are two different parts of town.