Improvements[edit source]
- Use <ref>sdfsdf</ref> to do references
- Don't repeat -- e.g. why is 1968 so important?
- Market - how many/year, total.
- 2.1 needs technical details.
- Cut out history lessons
- Use equation editor, superscripts and subscripts - show what your are doing more clearly - where are you getting numbers
- Check your estimate of Si using industry numbers for Si production - does it make sense?
Overall good start.