Improvements[edit source]
- Describe your project not the assignment.
- Fix copy right violations, get permissions ,or remake figures that are necessary (e.g. if no commercial production uses sputtering you dont need to have it).
- After you define (CIGS) don't type it out again, don't define more than once.
- Use subscripts
- What does this mean? "Aside from just PV cells,..."
- No fact should be unreferenced. Reference things like the bandgap equation.
- CIGS are NOT the most efficient PV material no matter how you look at it.
- For each of the major manufacturers what process do they use?
- Add more detail to section 1.3 -- each of the methods currently in use.
- For the viability - do your own calculation with current numbers don't relay on McDonald and Pearce, the industry moves fast and those values may be out of date (e.g. efficiency is going up) as are tipping costs. Probably best to look at one process.
Overall nice work.