Opportunity Definition feedback[edit source]
Please be a little more formal with the writing (e.g. have strong topic sentences that do not start with "we", introduce a list before listing items, etc.). Please make an objective statement. Note that rainwater and greywater are not the same thing.
See the page history for a couple of small changes I made.
--Lonny 16:50, 4 February 2013 (PST)