General Criticism[edit source]
Here are some notes we took while looking at your page:
Finish up the instructions, they're looking good, a few photos need to be changed, check the spanish translations Separate the two teams budget Tidy up Instructions for other plasters? Put steps in a clearer table Update team info
Specifics[edit source]
The spanish columns are definitely a good idea, just make sure the translations are good and make sense. The galleries are good as well, but they do take up a lot of space. Like I mentioned on your other page, it'd be good to put your lit review on a separate page and have a link to it instead, that way the reader can get to the meat of your page immediately. Your timeline would also look neater in a table. When doing your how-to's, remember to think of what the reader would be looking for. Go to old pages and consider what they had and what you think they should have had. Otherwise, two thumbs up!
7-4-15 I made some edits -- I mostly deleted the ugly stuff that you guys left. There are some empty tables and sections at the bottom that should have been finished by the friday the program ended. Other than that, your page looks pretty good!