Talk:Flock House EcoDermis

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Notes from meeting:

  • stronger, punctuated, longer statement.
  • stronger objective.
  • intro criteria
  • copy edit
  • No 3D graphs for 2D data.
  • Implementation cost table issue.
  • unbuffeted?
  • 100 lb
  • weigh
  • grammar issues in Data/Results
  • eye loop bolts?
  • continue to
  • what to do, versus what you did.
  • more specific and present tense (and inspiring) in the abstract.
  • More grammar checking (paste into word for help).

Thanks, --Lonny 16:28, 1 December 2011 (PST)