Notes from meeting:
- stronger, punctuated, longer statement.
- stronger objective.
- intro criteria
- copy edit
- No 3D graphs for 2D data.
- Implementation cost table issue.
- 100 lb
- grammar issues in Data/Results
- eye loop bolts?
- continue to
- what to do, versus what you did.
- more specific and present tense (and inspiring) in the abstract.
- More grammar checking (paste into word for help).
Thanks, --Lonny 16:28, 1 December 2011 (PST)