Initial feedback[edit source]
Hello,
This is a good start but needs some editing and additions. The first few paragraphs especially should be free of grammatical and spelling errors. This is the first impression your reader gets of you and you want it to be good. Please re-read your first few paragraphs out loud and check for errors or strange wording. Make sure your writing is professional. Re-read your problem statement it could be phrased a bit better.
I would recommend adding a material's section and the pros and cons of the various material options. Also, you should have a client section and information on what is there and how the current system is working (or not working). A section on cold boxes with other projects people have done would be great. Just start by using google. There may even be other cold boxed on appropedia.
Good start but more content.
Rebecca Stark (grader)
Criteria[edit source]
Hello Team, Your criteria needs some work. Your constraints are not very clear. Try to be more specific. Have a person not on your team read your criteria and see if they understand. How will you judge your aesthetics? Also almost all your weights are 10s it seems very unlikely they would all be 10s. Your constraints should also state whether more or less is better, for example for cost less is better.
Rebecca Stark (grader)