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Question regarding HP[edit]

Hi Gang,

Nice work on the page. In the sentence, "It provides tours, workshops, and experiential learning opportunities to the local community. CCAT’s solar and other systems have been featured in HP32 and HP43," are you referring to Home Power magazine? Either way, please provide full words and a citation.

Thanks, --Lonny 12:36, 14 October 2011 (PDT)

308 Editing Comment[edit]

Hi guys, I can see you put a lot of time into this page and there is a lot of useful information present. However, the quality of the information you gathered is lost through unrefined presentation. Text is difficult to look at and read if it lacks in indentation at the start of paragraphs. There are many run on sentences in each section of this page. Try to break up information instead of writing paragraph long sentences. Much of the technical information on this page lacks citation. This weakens the validity of the page. This page contains personal assertions that are inappropriate in this type of document "ie so obviously… , that was simply unacceptable to them." --MeghanHeintz 22:20, 17 October 2011 (PDT)