General Criticism[edit source]
References at the bottom
Timeline needs work (put in table or something neater) Update steps on Instructions (they all say the same thing) Troubleshooting section (what went wrong, how did you fix it) possibly included in the construction steps
Specifics[edit source]
You guys don't have much so there isn't much to say. When you guys put in your how-to's, don't focus so much on each step, but more on what could be helpful to the reader AT that step.. Also, since you guys will be making a lot of different things, maybe just have a section of finished projects? Since your project was very experimental the parts that DIDN'T work are more important than what DID work. Especially since your machine is super complicated and fickle.. Things that went wrong and HOW you fixed them are going to be most helpful to your reader(i.e. another filistruder buyer). PLEASE move your references to the bottom!!!!
7-4-15 From what you have, your tables look pretty good. Everything looks clean which is nice as well. Maybe make your conclusion a paragraph instead of bullets. Other than that there isn't much feedback I can give because your page is unfinished.