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The mechanical properties of carbon nanotubes are defined by two main measurements, the Young’s Modulus and tensile strength (carbon nanotubes are respectively the stiffest and strongest materials yet to be discovered). The Young’s modulus is a measurement of the stiffness of a material, while the tensile strength descries how much stress is needed to for the material to fail catastrophically. | |||
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Rather than actually explain the Young's modulus and stiffness in your own words, provide direct hyperlinks to the terms on Wikipedia to facilitate easier reading. See the coding of other articles in our class to figure out how to do this, if don't know how to already. | Rather than actually explain the Young's modulus and stiffness in your own words, provide direct hyperlinks to the terms on Wikipedia to facilitate easier reading. See the coding of other articles in our class to figure out how to do this, if don't know how to already. | ||
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It provides amazing energy enhancements. | |||
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You can instead say "It provides significant energy enhancements over current methods." and then provide a reference to an article confirming this. I feel the first instance of quoted text is more personal opinion than actual fact. | You can instead say "It provides significant energy enhancements over current methods." and then provide a reference to an article confirming this. I feel the first instance of quoted text is more personal opinion than actual fact. |