Talk:CCAT bike powered tools: Difference between revisions

-Make sure to list criteria in table in order of their weights. Largest to smallest

Feedback sections/template

Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:

• Abstract
  • Try avoid using third person (I,We,Our) etc..
  • Only need to describe the problem and the approach to solving that problem. Do not include project details yet.
• Background
  • Good
• Problem statement
• Criteria
  • Look over constraints to criteria once more. These need to explain in a little detail to how they will provide a definition to these criteria
  • Table looks good

• Literature Review
  • Opening statement needs to say this was research not a review
  • Provide more detail to energy and power section. What is work and how is it used to create energy?
  • Explain in more detail what Alternating and Direct Current are in electricity section
  • Had enough sources but check their validity to the information presented.
  • Safety section is good

• Construction
  • Be sure to move the Design section as a subheading into the construction section
  • Put captions onto each figure or photo. They need to be able to explain and stand alone in their description of the figure.

• Timeline
  • Looks good in format, add some minor details to each deadline presented

• Costs
  • Very Good, be sure that estimated costs for each component are accurate.

• Operation
  • Mobile components need to have the caption below the figures and also be included into the construction section. For information about putting a caption onto a figure refer to appropedia help or my 215 project http://www.appropedia.org/Zane_Middle_School_RIPSAW

• Maintenance
• Schedule
• Instructions
• Conclusion
• Testing results
• Discussion
• Lessons learned
• Next steps
• Troubleshooting
• Team

• Be sure to continue working hard, this was a good 1st draft. Finish up the remaining sections

• References
  • Reference formatting looks good