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== Feedback sections/template == | |||
Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections: | |||
*Abstract | |||
** Include an abstract that summarizes the whole project | |||
*Background | |||
** Include team members appropedia page links | |||
** explain the background of the project | |||
*Problem statement | |||
** good problem statement | |||
*Criteria | |||
** criteria are good | |||
*Literature Review | |||
** Very good start | |||
** add references using the format listed is this link http://www.appropedia.org/Help:Footnotes | |||
*Construction | |||
** include a table describing the steps taken during construction, with figures and descriptions | |||
*Timeline | |||
** good timeline | |||
*Costs | |||
** Looks good; add some prices for the wood | |||
* Operation | |||
** include a table that describes the steps of operation of the final design, include figures and detail | |||
* Maintenance | |||
** good introduction, proof read and include some more detail to why it needs to be maintained | |||
* Schedule | |||
** include a schedule of maintenance | |||
* Instructions | |||
** include instructions table describing to build or use the project; include detail and photos | |||
* Conclusion | |||
** include these section with more detail in next appropedia upload | |||
*Testing results | |||
*Discussion | |||
*Lessons learned | |||
*Next steps | |||
*Troubleshooting | |||
** troubleshooting section required; table format | |||
*References | |||
** very good format | |||
** possibly add more references |
Revision as of 19:26, 17 May 2015
-Link user pages with names
-Link references to information in literature review
-List criteria in weight from largest to smallest
Feedback sections/template
Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:
- Abstract
- Include an abstract that summarizes the whole project
- Background
- Include team members appropedia page links
- explain the background of the project
- Problem statement
- good problem statement
- Criteria
- criteria are good
- Literature Review
- Very good start
- add references using the format listed is this link http://www.appropedia.org/Help:Footnotes
- Construction
- include a table describing the steps taken during construction, with figures and descriptions
- Timeline
- good timeline
- Costs
- Looks good; add some prices for the wood
- Operation
- include a table that describes the steps of operation of the final design, include figures and detail
- Maintenance
- good introduction, proof read and include some more detail to why it needs to be maintained
- Schedule
- include a schedule of maintenance
- Instructions
- include instructions table describing to build or use the project; include detail and photos
- Conclusion
- include these section with more detail in next appropedia upload
- Testing results
- Discussion
- Lessons learned
- Next steps
- Troubleshooting
- troubleshooting section required; table format
- References
- very good format
- possibly add more references