Talk:CCAT MEOW 2015: Difference between revisions

- Be sure to use the format used when linking names: refer to background section

- In literature review add some writing to link ideas and evidence together, not just listing evidence in quotations

Feedback sections/template

Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:

• Refer to format listed on this link http://www.appropedia.org/Engineering_305/Project_template_and_grading

• Abstract
  • sentence structure needs improvement

• Background
  • Good section just add that it was in the Spring 2015 semester
  • Add some information about northern California and where Humboldt State is located

• Problem statement
• Criteria
  • weighted criteria table should be in descending order of importance
  • Look over the constraints for maintainability, ease of use, and educational value once more

• Literature Review
  • Make sure to put this section before the timeline and after criteria
  • Add some own discussion of information found instead of listing resources you have found

• Construction
  • Include more detail in construction steps.
  • Number steps
  • Make sure to include this after literature review and before timeline

• Timeline
  • Center timeline table on the screen

• Costs
  • Be sure to include the total spent compared to the actual cost in table

• Operation
  • Include link to MEOW page as well as brief table of steps explaining its operation

• Maintenance
  • Include this section

• Schedule
  • Not listed

• Instructions
  • Include a table of instructions described on this link http://www.appropedia.org/Engineering_305/Project_template_and_grading

• Conclusion
  • Grammar mistakes, look over

• Testing results
• Discussion
• Lessons learned
• Next steps
• Troubleshooting
• Team

• References
  • Looks good