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== Feedback sections/template == | |||
Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections: | |||
*Abstract | |||
**Try avoid using third person (I,We,Our) etc.. | |||
**Only need to describe the problem and the approach to solving that problem. Do not include project details yet. | |||
*Background | |||
**Good | |||
*Problem statement | |||
*Criteria | |||
** Look over constraints to criteria once more. These need to explain in a little detail to how they will provide a definition to these criteria | |||
** Table looks good | |||
*Literature Review | |||
** Add some more references | |||
*Construction | |||
** Be sure to move the Design section as a subheading into the construction section | |||
** Put captions onto each figure or photo. They need to be able to explain and stand alone in their description of the figure. | |||
*Timeline | |||
** Looks good in format, add some minor details to each deadline presented | |||
*Costs | |||
** Very Good, be sure that estimated costs for each component are accurate. | |||
* Operation | |||
** Mobile components need to have the caption below the figures and also be included into the construction section. For information about putting a caption onto a figure refer to appropedia help or my 215 project [[Zane Middle School RIPSAW]] | |||
* Maintenance | |||
* Schedule | |||
* Instructions | |||
* Conclusion | |||
*Testing results | |||
**include this section with some data | |||
*Discussion | |||
*Lessons learned | |||
*Next steps | |||
*Troubleshooting | |||
** add some steps to solving potential problems; links to external rainwater catchment systems | |||
*Team | |||
* Be sure to continue working hard, this was a good 1st draft. Finish up the remaining sections | |||
*References | |||
** Reference formatting looks good | |||
Sorry I did not include this feedback before it was due. Add the troubleshooting and testing results sections and this page will be pretty good |
Revision as of 20:30, 17 May 2015
- Link user names into the Background Section
Feedback sections/template
Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:
- Abstract
- Try avoid using third person (I,We,Our) etc..
- Only need to describe the problem and the approach to solving that problem. Do not include project details yet.
- Background
- Good
- Problem statement
- Criteria
- Look over constraints to criteria once more. These need to explain in a little detail to how they will provide a definition to these criteria
- Table looks good
- Literature Review
- Add some more references
- Construction
- Be sure to move the Design section as a subheading into the construction section
- Put captions onto each figure or photo. They need to be able to explain and stand alone in their description of the figure.
- Timeline
- Looks good in format, add some minor details to each deadline presented
- Costs
- Very Good, be sure that estimated costs for each component are accurate.
- Operation
- Mobile components need to have the caption below the figures and also be included into the construction section. For information about putting a caption onto a figure refer to appropedia help or my 215 project Zane Middle School RIPSAW
- Maintenance
- Schedule
- Instructions
- Conclusion
- Testing results
- include this section with some data
- Discussion
- Lessons learned
- Next steps
- Troubleshooting
- add some steps to solving potential problems; links to external rainwater catchment systems
- Team
- Be sure to continue working hard, this was a good 1st draft. Finish up the remaining sections
- References
- Reference formatting looks good
Sorry I did not include this feedback before it was due. Add the troubleshooting and testing results sections and this page will be pretty good