Talk:Bayside Park Farm living roof: Difference between revisions

Feedback sections/template

Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:

• Abstract
  • Good abstract
  • Include a picture of the final design to grab readers attention

• Background
  • Explain where in Arcata is in California
  • Don't use the first person (I,We, Our) etc..

• Problem statement
  • Possibly add a reference in this section

• Criteria
  • List criteria in descending order
  • Look over constraints once more for criteria

• Literature Review
  • Include the references next to the sentences they belong to

• Construction
  • Very good table maybe add a little more detail
  • Design section should be a subheading section inside the construction section
  • The layers table should be a figure describing each one. The figure used in Literature review should be good
  • add a captions to the drawings of design

• Timeline
  • Organize table a little cleaner
  • Add some detail to each week and what was done

• Costs
  • Make sure the decimals and significant figures agree in the cost table

• Operation
  • Include a table with steps similar to the construction table

• Maintenance
  • explain in more detail the maintenance required for cleaning roof

• Schedule
  • This should be a schedule depicted in table

• Instructions
• Conclusion
  • Good work so far include these sections completed with the next appropedia upload

• Testing results
• Discussion
• Lessons learned
• Next steps
• Troubleshooting
• Team

• References
  • Listed correctly, look for some more references