Talk:Bayside Park Farm Vermicomposting: Difference between revisions

Add links for user pages in background

-List criteria in table by weight from largest to smallest

Feedback sections/template[edit source]

Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:

• Abstract
  • Include an abstract that summarizes the whole project

• Background
  • Include team members appropedia page links
  • explain where Arcata is in California

• Problem statement
  • Good introduction

• Criteria
  • redo the constraint for aesthetics

• Literature Review
  • Very good start, maybe include some detail on some construction materials used

• Construction
  • include a table describing the steps taken during construction, with figures and descriptions

• Timeline
  • Very good timeline

• Costs
  • Looks good, list a price for soil if it were to be bought at store

• Operation
  • include a table that describes the steps of operation of the final design, include figures and detail

• Maintenance
  • good introduction, proof read and include some more detail to why it needs to be maintained

• Schedule
  • good schedule of maintenance

• Instructions
  • put instructions into a table to organize a little better

• Conclusion
  • include these section with more detail in next appropedia upoad
• Testing results
• Discussion
• Lessons learned
• Next steps
• Troubleshooting
  • very good troubleshooting table

• References
  • very good format
  • possibly add more references