Mech 370[edit source]
Overall I say you did a real good job and I just have made some minor edits with some grammar and words. Though one think I really suggest that you put into your page is referencing during the article.
To reference/link to a Wikipedia page use this format W
For your references at the bottom of the page if you want to have them referencing parts of your article here is the format:
< ref name="Plasma Spraying" >URL , date< /ref >
To use the reference again somewhere else in the article just do this:
< ref name="Plasma Spraying"/ >
Instead of having to write out your references on the reference section you are able just to type a simple code and its put there on its own.
< references/ >
Just get rid of the spaces for what is between the brackets.
I couldn't see any major things that needed to be edited, but instead of always having to explain every simple little concept, like what exactly pedal power is you can link to it from another site, so if people don't know what it is they can read up more on it. You could think about doing that as an addition to what you have already put down there.
I will look over it again on Thursday for my final edits on your page.
Rename page -- everything on this site is appropriate technology
- Formatting: Fix headers,tie into appropedia with hyperlinks, use existing site resources to explain basic concepts, categorize properly
- Content: cite each concept directly using <ref> commands, quantify your suggestions - consider choosing the most promising one and working in some calculations to prove your point
--Joshua 15:15, 19 November 2008 (UTC)