To get the skin to work you need to move the monobook pages you created to your user directory.
You can do this by going to the pages and clicking the move tab. --Joshua 12:29, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
Great work! Excellent foundation. Recommendation- take one of the ideas in section 4 and quantify it - you have listed qualitative improvements - convince us that one of them will unquestionably improve our process - --Joshua 15:27, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
Sorry for the late edit. I did it on Friday however I assume I didn't save any feedback or I made a mistake and it did not save.
Good article. Good details and background. I found your article gave me insight into the casting process and now I have a superior understanding relating to the subject. You have many references which is good. Make sure they are from legit sources before the final submission date to for academic purposes.
- Good Content and Detail
- Review 'How It Works' paragraph. Some ideas within text are fragmented/unclear and non-concise:Consider reviewing.
- I edited some awkward sentences however go through Text for consistency with bolding titles.
Potentially Research Patents to provide information on current improvements being made today.
Consider finding and adding more information directly related to energy efficiency.