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Overall, your page was good. I spotted a few grammar errors and there were some formatting errors.

To avoid dashed line boxes, do not include extra spaces. For example, your code looked like this:

- writing

It should look like this:

  • writing

The last sentence of your "about me" section was confusing. I would re-reading it and to see if you can make more clear.