General Criticism[edit source]
6/29/15 Here are some of things we noticed while going over your page.. Most of them are on missing sections, which I assume you will all complete.
Empty areas on lit review Nothing on Construction Timeline needs work (put in table or something neater) Costs table need to be separated into blocks and botica Instructions needs to be started Team names Schedule?
7-4-15
For your criteria, instead of having two giant tables, you could make two seperate columns for english/spanish likeyou did below
There are still some things left unfinished at the bottom.
Your operation section -- are you gonna finish that?
I really like all of the tables you have for the recipes, but why do you only have one? Be sure to tell why you didn't use all of them, and maybe a paragraph about what went wrong with the recipes. You have a lot of tables but they lack description, you want your reading to know the big picture and results, not just the logistics. Don't think so much like an engineer! ;)
Specifics[edit source]
Remember to keep your page as neat and aesthetically pleasing as possible, you want people to actually want to read it! A good thing to clean it up might making your lit review a separate page and linking it instead. Your timeline would also look better in a table. Keep up the good work!