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Talk:CCAT greenhouse dehumidifier

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Initial feedback[edit source]

Hello,

This is a good start but needs some editing and additions. The first few paragraphs especially should be free of grammatical and spelling errors. This is the first impression your reader gets of you and you want it to be good. Please re-read your first few paragraphs out loud and check for errors or strange wording. You need more information in your background section, what is this project for, the class. Be sure to explain all acronyms (HSU, CCAT).

I would add a section on greenhouses and what humidity the plants they need to grow. Another addition would be on other projects or examples of humidifiers in greenhouses. Also, you should have a client section and information on what is there and how the current system is working

Good start but needs quite a bit of work.

Rebecca Stark (grader)

Criteria[edit source]

Hello Team, Your criteria is pretty good. I suggest adding to your maintainability constraint the ease of maintenance (be specific what would need to be maintained) not just including a manual. Your constraints should also state whether more or less is better, for example for cost less is better. What is your constraints for dehumidifying the greenhouse, how will you judge it?

Rebecca Stark (grader)