Improvements[edit source]
- Careful about image copyright violations -
- CMOS is not a type of semiconductor - it is a type of semiconductor device
- 1.3 needs checked for clarity and facts.
- This "Like all semiconductors made today..." is not true.
- Rather than just external hyperlink use <ref> sadfsdf </ref>
- Use the equation editor and subscripts and superscripts to clean up text
- More clear calculations -- your overall number seems really large - logic check it.
- Clean up and put refs in correct format
Great start.
Can we get the copyright violation thing taken off? We fixed all of the errors associated with that list you gave us.
- Hello anon, a brief look suggests you haven't checked all the image attributions. For example the first image is actually from wikimedia - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Pacemaker_GuidantMeridianSR.jpg. At the very least you should link to the original location for the file on the Appropedia imagepage, but ideally you should copy all of the attribution information and add the correct licensing for each image you've used. thanks, Joeturner 08:58, 8 May 2013 (PDT)