-Link user pages with names
-Link references to information in literature review
-List criteria in weight from largest to smallest
Feedback sections/template[edit source]
Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:
- Abstract
- Include an abstract that summarizes the whole project
- Background
- Include team members appropedia page links
- explain the background of the project
- Problem statement
- good problem statement
- Criteria
- criteria are good
- Literature Review
- Very good start
- add references using the format listed is this link Help:Footnotes
- Construction
- include a table describing the steps taken during construction, with figures and descriptions
- Timeline
- good timeline
- Costs
- Looks good; add some prices for the wood
- Operation
- include a table that describes the steps of operation of the final design, include figures and detail
- Maintenance
- good introduction, proof read and include some more detail to why it needs to be maintained
- Schedule
- include a schedule of maintenance
- Instructions
- include instructions table describing to build or use the project; include detail and photos
- Conclusion
- include these section with more detail in next appropedia upload
- Testing results
- Discussion
- Lessons learned
- Next steps
- Troubleshooting
- troubleshooting section required; table format
- References
- possibly add more references
- fix formatting
Thanks, I apologize for not doing this sooner I didn't give you feedback before it was due.