Onset Emmission the last sentence before the formulas needs to be better written
there are a few sentences that could be written a little better, but all and all really interesting.
This looks amazing. Overall very professional and well organized. Explanations are well done also. My only suggestions would be to get your pictures from the nano-software and possibly make the equations in the work a bit more easy to read.
Ben Sturtz--Benjamin W. Sturtz 10:51, 8 April 2008 (PDT)