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From what I can tell, this entire article is pasted straight from instructables--[http://www.instructables.com/id/9-simple-measures-to-become-green-healthy-and-soc/ www.instructables.com/id/9-simple-measures-to-become-green-healthy-and-soc/]. The instructable might be partially copied from a book, since there are pictures of self-help books? I don't know. The topic has a chance of being good; the current article is hopelessly difficult to read and seems to suffer from One True Wayism. Or perhaps it is just the author's personal plan (he or she often says "we will do this, then we will do this...") and we need to make it more applicable to others. He or she has a total plan in a zip file included; it's not a very definite plan, but it is certainly some research. I am re-arranging the way that the original author laid out the information, breaking it down into categories, and re-sorting some of the categories before re-writing entire sections for clarity. I welcome all additions. --rejoicingapathy | From what I can tell, this entire article is pasted straight from instructables--[http://www.instructables.com/id/9-simple-measures-to-become-green-healthy-and-soc/ www.instructables.com/id/9-simple-measures-to-become-green-healthy-and-soc/]. The instructable might be partially copied from a book, since there are pictures of self-help books? I don't know. The topic has a chance of being good; the current article is hopelessly difficult to read and seems to suffer from One True Wayism. Or perhaps it is just the author's personal plan (he or she often says "we will do this, then we will do this...") and we need to make it more applicable to others. He or she has a total plan in a zip file included; it's not a very definite plan, but it is certainly some research. I am re-arranging the way that the original author laid out the information, breaking it down into categories, and re-sorting some of the categories before re-writing entire sections for clarity. I welcome all additions. --rejoicingapathy | ||
:I agree. Thank you for working on this! --[[User:Lonny|Lonny]] 22:12, 5 November 2010 (UTC) | |||
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From what I can tell, this entire article is pasted straight from instructables--www.instructables.com/id/9-simple-measures-to-become-green-healthy-and-soc/. The instructable might be partially copied from a book, since there are pictures of self-help books? I don't know. The topic has a chance of being good; the current article is hopelessly difficult to read and seems to suffer from One True Wayism. Or perhaps it is just the author's personal plan (he or she often says "we will do this, then we will do this...") and we need to make it more applicable to others. He or she has a total plan in a zip file included; it's not a very definite plan, but it is certainly some research. I am re-arranging the way that the original author laid out the information, breaking it down into categories, and re-sorting some of the categories before re-writing entire sections for clarity. I welcome all additions. --rejoicingapathy
- I agree. Thank you for working on this! --Lonny 22:12, 5 November 2010 (UTC)