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== Copyediting - Queries == Query 1: Appropedia's page naming conventions specify that only the first letter of the first word and proper nouns be capitalized. The resulting title should look like this, "Tin bicycle--The design contest motivation." The website doesn't have any specifications for headlines, but I think you should consider formatting those similarly for symmetry. Query 2: The term "third world" can be considered derogatory by some. I noticed that you used "developing countries" and "poor countries" in this article also, and I think it would be a good idea to use one of those terms instead. Query 3: Be sure to include a hyperlink or other reference for "Club of Rome report." Query 4: I was a little confused by the phrase "system labor-life." Consider rewriting for clarity.
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