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1.Who do you feel is the target audience for the writing in this document? Suggest a change if you think the writing is not appropriate for this audience. Anyone interested in learning about the effectiveness of a lighting retrofit. | 1.Who do you feel is the target audience for the writing in this document? Suggest a change if you think the writing is not appropriate for this audience. Anyone interested in learning about the effectiveness of a lighting retrofit. | ||
2.Is the information presented easy to navigate? Can you find the necessary information easily? How would you improve the layout? The information is easy to navigate through, and the necessary information is easy to find. However, this is partly because there isn’t much to navigate through or find. I would keep building on the existing layout, adding more information. I know this can be hard when an interview or information is sparse. Once you get your information on your page, breaking up the section “Retrofits” into more sections. | 2.Is the information presented easy to navigate? Can you find the necessary information easily? How would you improve the layout? The information is easy to navigate through, and the necessary information is easy to find. However, this is partly because there isn’t much to navigate through or find. I would keep building on the existing layout, adding more information. I know this can be hard when an interview or information is sparse. Once you get your information on your page, breaking up the section “Retrofits” into more sections. | ||