Talk:Las Malvinas destacamento: Difference between revisions

Notes for Improvement

General Notes

• Use the Practivistas Dominicana/Page template and criteria page for as a formatting template, and refer to it for specific grading criteria.
• Add some photos or one really good one to the top of your page
• Incomplete sections (Final Design/Construction)
• Missing sections (Conclusions & Team)

Abstract

• Abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page... it only summarizes (like a research paper)

Background

• Consider revising sentence structure
• Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper)
• Include information about who you are and where Las Malvinas is located

Objective

• Be a little more specific (add design and construct)

Criteria

Construction

Timeline

• Good start
• Add an introduction
• Come up with actual propsed dates as soon as possible

Costs

• Fix math - if total $US was what you were aiming for (which is helpful) then make sure you label it as such and also add a total RD$ column
• Add introduction
• You won't be including individual costs for each material that goes into the blocks you will use (that's block biz's job) instead I assume we will estimate cost per block and reference the other block team's budget/page

How To/Design

• Good start on the how to section.
• Good design of destacamento.