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===Construction===
===Construction===
====Timeline====
====Timeline====
*Good start
*Add an introduction
*Come up with actual propsed dates as soon as possible
====Costs====
====Costs====
*Fix math - if total $US was what you were aiming for (which is helpful) then make sure you label it as such and also add a total RD$ column
*You won't be including individual costs for each material that goes into the blocks you will use (that's block biz's job) instead I assume we will estimate cost per block and reference the other block team's budget/page

Revision as of 16:29, 16 June 2014

Notes for Improvement

Abstract

  • Abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page... it only summarizes (like a research paper)

Background

  • Consider revising sentence structure
  • Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper)
  • Include information about who you are and where Las Malvinas is located

Objective

  • Be a little more specific (add design and construct)

Criteria

Construction

Timeline

  • Good start
  • Add an introduction
  • Come up with actual propsed dates as soon as possible

Costs

  • Fix math - if total $US was what you were aiming for (which is helpful) then make sure you label it as such and also add a total RD$ column
  • You won't be including individual costs for each material that goes into the blocks you will use (that's block biz's job) instead I assume we will estimate cost per block and reference the other block team's budget/page
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