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*Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper) | *Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper) | ||
*Go into detail about "local materials" that are available here | |||
===Problem Statement=== | ===Problem Statement=== | ||
====Criteria==== | ====Criteria==== |
Revision as of 16:28, 13 June 2014
Notes for Improvement
Abstract
- Good start... keep this updated as project progesses
- Abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page... it only summarizes (like a research paper)
Background
- Add the local name of the community center in Las Malvinas
- Consider revising sentence structure
- Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper)
- Go into detail about "local materials" that are available here