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*Consider revising sentence structure
*Consider revising sentence structure
*Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper)
*Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper)
*Go into detail about "local materials" that are available here


===Problem Statement===
===Problem Statement===
====Criteria====
====Criteria====

Revision as of 16:28, 13 June 2014

Notes for Improvement

Abstract

  • Good start... keep this updated as project progesses
  • Abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page... it only summarizes (like a research paper)

Background

  • Add the local name of the community center in Las Malvinas
  • Consider revising sentence structure
  • Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper)
  • Go into detail about "local materials" that are available here

Problem Statement

Criteria

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