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==Notes for Improvement== | ==Notes for Improvement== | ||
===Abstract=== | ===Abstract=== | ||
Good start... keep this updated as project progesses | *Good start... keep this updated as project progesses | ||
*Abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page... it only summarizes (like a research paper) | |||
===Background=== | ===Background=== | ||
*Add the local name of the community center in Las Malvinas | *Add the local name of the community center in Las Malvinas | ||
Revision as of 16:26, 13 June 2014
Notes for Improvement
Abstract
- Good start... keep this updated as project progesses
- Abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page... it only summarizes (like a research paper)
Background
- Add the local name of the community center in Las Malvinas
- Consider revising sentence structure
- Include information from abstract here... abstract should not contain any information that is not mentioned throughought the rest of the project page (like a research paper)