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- Add captions to images and figures | 1- Add captions to images and figures | ||
- Talk about the synthesis of the nano-tubes, and what processes we learnt about in 370 are actually applied in the manufacturing process of CNT's. This part remained slightly ambiguous. | 2- Talk about the synthesis of the nano-tubes, and what processes we learnt about in 370 are actually applied in the manufacturing process of CNT's. This part remained slightly ambiguous. | ||
- Talk about how you could improve on these processes to increase the efficiency/energy savings of the processes. Even if it is in only hypothetical terms. | 3- Talk about how you could improve on these processes to increase the efficiency/energy savings of the processes. Even if it is in only hypothetical terms. | ||
Otherwise, the page is coming along well. | Otherwise, the page is coming along well. | ||
--[[User:B.S.Kukreja|B.S.Kukreja]] 19:58, 18 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
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I would suggest that you improve the formatting of your document by 'cleaning' it up. I found it a bit hard to go through in the beginning. For example, use major headings and sub headings.
Coding in page would look like this: ==Introduction== is easier to read than ===Introduction=== (for a major heading) Test those out and see how you can implement them, if need be.
Suggestions: 1- Add captions to images and figures 2- Talk about the synthesis of the nano-tubes, and what processes we learnt about in 370 are actually applied in the manufacturing process of CNT's. This part remained slightly ambiguous. 3- Talk about how you could improve on these processes to increase the efficiency/energy savings of the processes. Even if it is in only hypothetical terms.
Otherwise, the page is coming along well.
--B.S.Kukreja 19:58, 18 November 2009 (UTC)