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Was looking over your page and I think it is turning out well so far. After you've got it all put together you might want to go back over it just to look at wording, etc. Another thing to consider ... I'm not sure what kind of tone is appropriate for these pages, but you might want to make it less conversational (i.e. As everyone knows...) and more scientific-sounding (It is a well-known fact...), if that makes sense. I don't know, that's just my opinion. | Was looking over your page and I think it is turning out well so far. After you've got it all put together you might want to go back over it just to look at wording, etc. Another thing to consider ... I'm not sure what kind of tone is appropriate for these pages, but you might want to make it less conversational (i.e. As everyone knows...) and more scientific-sounding (It is a well-known fact...), if that makes sense. I don't know, that's just my opinion. | ||
-[[User:Sean McFarland|Sean McFarland]] 10:36, 8 April 2008 (PDT) | -[[User:Sean McFarland|Sean McFarland]] 10:36, 8 April 2008 (PDT) | ||
Your project is looking good so far. | |||
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Hey Ben, Was looking over your page and I think it is turning out well so far. After you've got it all put together you might want to go back over it just to look at wording, etc. Another thing to consider ... I'm not sure what kind of tone is appropriate for these pages, but you might want to make it less conversational (i.e. As everyone knows...) and more scientific-sounding (It is a well-known fact...), if that makes sense. I don't know, that's just my opinion. -Sean McFarland 10:36, 8 April 2008 (PDT)
Your project is looking good so far.