Talk:CCAT bike blender 2015: Difference between revisions

-Link user pages with names

-Link references to information in literature review

-List criteria in weight from largest to smallest

Feedback sections/template

Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:

• Abstract
  • Include an abstract that summarizes the whole project

• Background
  • Include team members appropedia page links
  • explain the background of the project

• Problem statement
  • good problem statement

• Criteria
  • criteria are good

• Literature Review
  • Very good start
  • add references using the format listed is this link Template:Http://www.appropedia.org/Help:Footnotes

• Construction
  • include a table describing the steps taken during construction, with figures and descriptions

• Timeline
  • good timeline

• Costs
  • Looks good; add some prices for the wood

• Operation
  • include a table that describes the steps of operation of the final design, include figures and detail

• Maintenance
  • good introduction, proof read and include some more detail to why it needs to be maintained

• Schedule
  • include a schedule of maintenance

• Instructions
  • include instructions table describing to build or use the project; include detail and photos

• Conclusion
  • include these section with more detail in next appropedia upload
• Testing results
• Discussion
• Lessons learned
• Next steps
• Troubleshooting
  • troubleshooting section required; table format

• References
  • very good format
  • possibly add more references

Thanks guys, I apologize for not doing this sooner I didn't give you feedback before it was due.

- Drew White