Talk:Bayside Park Farm rainwater catchment system: Difference between revisions

- Link user names into the Background Section

Feedback sections/template

Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:

• Abstract
  • Try avoid using third person (I,We,Our) etc..
  • Only need to describe the problem and the approach to solving that problem. Do not include project details yet.
• Background
  • Good
• Problem statement
• Criteria
  • Look over constraints to criteria once more. These need to explain in a little detail to how they will provide a definition to these criteria
  • Table looks good

• Literature Review
  • Add some more references

• Construction
  • Be sure to move the Design section as a subheading into the construction section
  • Put captions onto each figure or photo. They need to be able to explain and stand alone in their description of the figure.

• Timeline
  • Looks good in format, add some minor details to each deadline presented

• Costs
  • Very Good, be sure that estimated costs for each component are accurate.

• Operation
  • Mobile components need to have the caption below the figures and also be included into the construction section. For information about putting a caption onto a figure refer to appropedia help or my 215 project Zane Middle School RIPSAW

• Maintenance
• Schedule
• Instructions
• Conclusion
• Testing results
  • include this section with some data
• Discussion
• Lessons learned
• Next steps
• Troubleshooting
  • add some steps to solving potential problems; links to external rainwater catchment systems
• Team

• Be sure to continue working hard, this was a good 1st draft. Finish up the remaining sections

• References
  • Reference formatting looks good

Sorry I did not include this feedback before it was due. Add the troubleshooting and testing results sections and this page will be pretty good

Drew White