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== Feedback sections/template == | |||
Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections: | |||
*Abstract | |||
** Good abstract | |||
** Include a picture of the final design to grab readers attention | |||
*Background | |||
** Explain where in Arcata is in California | |||
*Problem statement | |||
** Possibly add a reference in this section | |||
*Criteria | |||
** List criteria in descending order | |||
** Look over constraints once more for criteria | |||
*Literature Review | |||
** Include the references next to the sentences they belong to | |||
*Construction | |||
** Very good table maybe add a little more detail | |||
** Design section should be a subheading section inside the construction section | |||
** The layers table should be a figure describing each one. The figure used in Literature review should be good | |||
** add a captions to the drawings of design | |||
*Timeline | |||
** Organize table a little cleaner | |||
** Add some detail to each week and what was done | |||
*Costs | |||
** Make sure the decimals and significant figures agree in the cost table | |||
* Operation | |||
** Include a table with steps similar to the construction table | |||
* Maintenance | |||
** explain in more detail the maintenance required for cleaning roof | |||
* Schedule | |||
** This should be a schedule depicted in table | |||
* Instructions | |||
* Conclusion | |||
** Good work so far include these sections completed with the next appropedia upload | |||
*Testing results | |||
*Discussion | |||
*Lessons learned | |||
*Next steps | |||
*Troubleshooting | |||
*Team | |||
*References | |||
** Listed correctly, look for some more references |
Revision as of 06:05, 27 April 2015
Feedback sections/template
Nice work so far. See below for comments on some sections:
- Abstract
- Good abstract
- Include a picture of the final design to grab readers attention
- Background
- Explain where in Arcata is in California
- Problem statement
- Possibly add a reference in this section
- Criteria
- List criteria in descending order
- Look over constraints once more for criteria
- Literature Review
- Include the references next to the sentences they belong to
- Construction
- Very good table maybe add a little more detail
- Design section should be a subheading section inside the construction section
- The layers table should be a figure describing each one. The figure used in Literature review should be good
- add a captions to the drawings of design
- Timeline
- Organize table a little cleaner
- Add some detail to each week and what was done
- Costs
- Make sure the decimals and significant figures agree in the cost table
- Operation
- Include a table with steps similar to the construction table
- Maintenance
- explain in more detail the maintenance required for cleaning roof
- Schedule
- This should be a schedule depicted in table
- Instructions
- Conclusion
- Good work so far include these sections completed with the next appropedia upload
- Testing results
- Discussion
- Lessons learned
- Next steps
- Troubleshooting
- Team
- References
- Listed correctly, look for some more references