Notes for Improvement

General Notes

Abstract

  • Don't include information in the abstract that is not included in the rest of the page.

Background

  • Mention when the project is taking place.

Problem Statement

Criteria

Literature Review

  • Looks way better

Construction

Timeline

  • Needs an introduction

Costs

  • Good start. Keep updated as your project progresses.
  • Don't forget to include free/donated materials
  • We should check with Lonny, but I'm wondering about creating cost tables for each separate prototype? If so, they could be moved underneath each prototype section.

Design Renderings

  • If you keep this section, I would explain more about what this thing was used for and include a picture

Completed Prototypes

  • I really like this layout
  • I highly recommend changing your language from prescriptive to descriptive here. For example, instead of "how to" use "how we".

Maintenance

  • Complete

Conclusions

  • Complete
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