Talk:Arroyo Norte sustainable market materials: Difference between revisions

Revision as of 00:56, 3 July 2014

Notes for Improvement

General Notes

Use the Practivistas Dominicana/Page template and criteria page for as a formatting template, and refer to it for specific grading criteria.
Place a picture at the top of your page

Abstract

Don't include information in the abstract that is not included in the rest of the page.

Background

Mention when the project is taking place.

Problem Statement

Criteria

Literature Review

Looks way better

Construction

Timeline

Needs an introduction

Costs

Good start. Keep updated as your project progresses.
Don't forget to include free/donated materials
We should check with Lonny, but I'm wondering about creating cost tables for each separate prototype? If so, they could be moved underneath each prototype section.

Design Renderings

If you keep this section, I would explain more about what this thing was used for and include a picture

Completed Prototypes

I really like this layout
I highly recommend changing your language from prescriptive to descriptive here. For example, instead of "how to" use "how we".

Maintenance

Complete

Conclusions

Complete

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 ===General Notes===
 *Use the [[Practivistas Dominicana/Page template and criteria]] page for as a formatting template, and refer to it for specific grading criteria.
-*Don't use screenshots of tables. Instead make a table within your page with the useful information and cite it.
+*Place a picture at the top of your page
 ===Abstract===
 *Don't include information in the abstract that is not included in the rest of the page.
 ===Background===
 *Mention when the project is taking place.
 ===Problem Statement===
 ====Criteria====
+===Literature Review===
+*Looks way better
 ===Construction===
 ====Timeline====
-*Make your own timeline
+*Needs an introduction
-====Design renderings====
-*Nice job. The tire wall design could use a little more labeling. It's not clear if that blue marks the start of a plastic bottle wall or if it is a table top with a glass bottle on it.
 ====Costs====
 *Good start. Keep updated as your project progresses.
 *Don't forget to include free/donated materials
-*It can be helpful to add a $U.S. column for a relative price assessment.
+*We should check with Lonny, but I'm wondering about creating cost tables for each separate prototype? If so, they could be moved underneath each prototype section.
+====Design Renderings====
+*If you keep this section, I would explain more about what this thing was used for and include a picture
+===Completed Prototypes===
+*I really like this layout
+*I highly recommend changing your language from prescriptive to descriptive here. For example, instead of "how to" use "how we".
-===Literature Review===
+===Maintenance===
-*Delete pictures that you do not own or that do not have creative commons licensing.
+*Complete
-===How To/Design===
+===Conclusions===
-*Good start on the how to process for creating plastic tiles.
+*Complete
-*Be sure to do the same for all aspects of your project eventually.
-*Great design drawings. Labels could help elucidate the tire wall.