You guys do not have a lot on here yet so I do not have that many comments. The first if to add a statement like "this section is being worked on" to any section that is not completed yet. Don't forget to add all your names and links to your personal appropedia pages at the bottom of the page with a link to it at the beginning of the page, something like "the group members (link)" . You have your names but need the links. Also shrink the alpha picture. Rename that section something that includes "team members" so people know what it is. Try to add to your background and abstract a bit more detail. Remember not to talk about anything till it is described. Your pictures all need a reference ( if it is your picture state that). Your pictures should all be similar sizes, your first picture in your abstract is huge. Your abstract needs to start a little slower, you get right into the project, add the purpose and who you guys are. Finally try to remember that this is being written for someone who has no idea about this project, this class, or anything about your topic. Really try to keep up on this page so you are not stuck doing a lot at the end of the semester.