Notes for Improvement[edit source]

yo our page has been viewed over 1000 times!!!!!!!!!!! check the bottom! so cool. -JAKE

General Notes[edit source]

  • Use the Practivistas Dominicana/Page template and criteria page for as a formatting template, and refer to it for specific grading criteria.
  • Pay careful attention to the grading criteria, and be sure to make any changes based on the feedback in the "Older Notes" section that haven't been made yet.
  • Be sure to introduce any table that you use.
  • It helps to have each team member proofread to catch grammatical errors and awkward phrasings.
  • Your video is private :(

How To[edit source]

  • Explain your project, without implying that it must be done a certain way. For example, "Step 4" should be changed to explain that that first flush was built to collect the first ten minutes of rain (if that is true). "the water will be as much as 90% cleaner after the first ten minutes." needs a citation.

Older Notes[edit source]

Abstract[edit source]

  • Content in abstract is more appropriate for Background and Objective sections.
  • Abstract should summarize the rest of the project page, and shouldn't include information that is not already included elsewhere in the page.

Construction[edit source]

Timeline[edit source]

  • Introduce table

Costs[edit source]

  • Introduce table
  • Calculate Total
  • Helpful to add a total $US column

How To/Design[edit source]

  • Good start on the how to section.
  • Filter cleaning is probably more appropriate for the Maintenance section. (And be sure to include information, like how often the filters should be replaced.)
  • Also, be sure to upload at least one good design of the system.
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